Next, we reviewed theme and how to write thesis statements by completing the chart below:
Correcting
Thematic Statements (Statements of Theme)
Name:
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Define theme:
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Correct the statement below by revising
the sentence and then explain why it is not a thematic statement.
In the story, “The Lamp At Noon”,
by Sinclair Ross, the two characters, Ellen and Paul, have an
argument, which leads to troubles in the relationship; the storm
makes their life conditions very hard and exhausting and it starts to
divide the family.
Revision:
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Why is the above thesis not a thematic
statement?
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A thesis of any kind, including a
thematic statement thesis must say something which is NOT in the
book. A thesis is your hypothesis which you plan to prove. It is the
opinion you created based on your research.
Go back to your TICK charts for “The
Lamp At Noon” and using ONE point from the title chart, ONE point
from the INTRO chart, ONE point from the conclusion chart, and ONE
point from your key points chart. Write your new thesis below:
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I returned the paragraphs and we made corrections.
Corrections due Friday.
Tomorrow, we will discuss the work you did on "The Doll's House" story.
Have a great night.