Tuesday, November 30, 2010

English 9, Tues. Nov. 30

We did words 26 to 29 today: morally, insolent, impertinent and defiant. Add them to your list.

We also wrote a 200 to 400 word journal entry in our journals from Farley's point of view based on the last sentence on page 52. Based on chapters 1 to 7, discuss how his attitude to wolves are changing.
Include in your journal references to the following:
  • appeal to the five sensens
  • be specific-refer to names of people, places, things
  • use sentence variety
  • include two quotes from the novel
  • examine his reluctance to give up the myth that wolves are vicious murderers
  • write about some of his silly reactions to the wolves, i.e. losing his temper, etc.
Tonight: Read chapters 8, 9, and 10 and be prepared to discuss them in class tomorrow.

Keep marking key passages about myths/realty of wolves with post-it notes.
Thank you.

English 11 E, Tues. Nov. 30

Most students have completed their novels and are now busy working on creating the responses. Follow the contract. Ask me for help with the criteria if you are unsure. For A quality work, always focus on facts plus inferences. Making connections between plot, character and theme will give you a higher mark.
Quality is key.

All projets due Tues. Dec. 7. Good luck.

Writing 12, Nov. 30

Last day for November USSR is today.

You read beautifully today. I was so proud. Congratulations.

Thursday: Bring copies of your story for our workshop.

Monday, November 29, 2010

Nov. 29, English 9

Today, I collected re-writes of the Temple Grandin paragraph. Congrats. to those students who are taking advantage of extra help. Remember there is tutoring with Mr. Bishop and the peer helpers in the library every Tues. and Wed. after school. A wonderful way to improve your English skills.

Today, we wrote our responses to chapters 3 and 4. We changed one key criterion for the journals. Instead of responding to all 24 chapters, you can pick and choose and combine chapters for a total of 15 responses. Quality is key, here.

Tonight, complete your USSR forms for November as Tues. Nov.30 (tomorrow) is the last day.

Tonight, also read chapters 6 and 7. You will have time to respond to these chapters in class. Also, keep post-it noting key passages for your essay--the myths and realities of wolves.

English 11 E, Mon. Nov. 29

Terrific readings today at the Poetry Cafe. Brilliant, poised, confident. Thank you. If you were away today, I'll need you to read your poems aloud as soon as you get back.
Thanks to all students who contributed goodies to the cafe. Delicious.

Tonight read your novel or work on your contract. You'll want to start the contract in class Tuesday.
This week, we'll be working on projects so bring supplies to class.

Writing 12, Monday, Nov. 29

Good work today. I hope your stories are progressing well. I collected the John Gould responses. I also need to check that you have submitted your work to the League, BCTELA, Claremont Review contest, Aerie International and to Polyphony. If you are missing any of these items, please submit today.

Saanich News: please ensure that your good copy is sent to my home email today.

NOVEMBER USSR FORMS DUE TUES. NOV. 30. CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR WHAT YOU THOUGHT OF THE SHORT STORY BOOKS AND MAGAZINES YOU'VE BEEN READING.

SMUS trip--tomorrow. Bring two poems or a piece of fiction to read aloud. Also, bring your lunch. We'll eat on the bus on the way back.

Story deadline date change: Your completed story is now due Mon. Dec. 6 Workshop groups announced today. Bring 2 to 3 copies (depending on the size of your group) to class Thursday.

You may use the SMUS trip as this term's literary event or as a replacement for the John Gould reading if you missed that last Friday. Hand in a SMUS response on Wed.

Friday, November 26, 2010

English 9, Friday, Nov. 26

Today, we finished reading chapter two and wrote a response for it in our journals. We read them aloud to ensure that they met the criteria.

I handed back the Temple Grandin paragraphs. If you wish to revise and re-submit, you may do so. Staple the new copy to the previous copy.

Read chapters 3 and 4. Be sure to post it note key passages to do with the myths and realities of wolves.

We wrote a chapter two response during class today and read them aloud. Remember the criteria for the journal responses:
  • in Farley's first person point of view
  • summarize key points from the chapter
  • refer to the question in your response
  • bring it to life with detail using the five senses i.e. what does wolf juice smell, taste, look like?
  • add a creative element--add more of Farley's reactions which are not in the book
  • use quotations from the book informally as part of your response
  • describe how he is feeling
  • defend some of his reactions to events
  • elaborate on key sections that interest you

English 11, Friday, Nov. 26

We read our novels all class today. Thanks for submitting to the Can. Poetic Licence Contest for Youth. You have a wonderful chance of winning. TBA April during National Poetry Month. If you win, let me know as they don't contact the school.

Don't forget the optional places to publish: BCTELA contest and Claremont Review contest.

Magazines: Claremont Review, Polyphony HS, and Aerie International.

Aim to have your novel read by Tuesday.

Monday: POETRY CAFE. BRING POEMS AND SNACKS TO SHARE. WE'LL READ, SNAP, OOH AND AHHH.

YOUR POEMS ARE SO GOOD. MOST CREATIVE ENGLISH 11E CLASS I'VE HAD IN A LONG TIME.

Writing 12, Friday, Nov. 26

Wasn't John Gould wonderful? Look forward to your John Gould responses on Monday.

Thanks for your two pages of fiction. I've read half of them and they are FANTASTIC! YAY.

Tonight, Black Stilt, come sign up for the open mic. You'll blow them away.

MONDAY, NOV. 29: PERMISSION FORMS AND JOHN GOULD RESPONSES.

Wed: Fiction Workshop. Please bring two double spaced copies of the story you plan to hand in on Thursday.


TUESDAY: NOVEMBER 30 IS THE LAST DAY TO SUMBIT USSR FORMS. YOU SHOULD BE FINISHED ALL THREE OF THE LIBRARY BOOKS. WE'LL DO TRADES TUES. AND YOU'LL SIGN OUT NEW ONES FOR DECEMBER.

Tues: WE'RE OFF TO SEE THE WIZARD, I MEAN, SMUS! Bring 2 to 3 poems or a short piece of fiction to read. Come to class first and we'll do attendance and an exercise and then we'll head to the bus. Bring your lunch. Nothing too smelly or drippy, please, since you'll eat it on the bus. Make sure your block 2 teachers know you will miss their class and that you know you are responsible for making up work missed.

Bill Gaston will be coming in to read to us. He'll confirm a date by Monday.

Dec. 10 Library Reading All student who haven't read yet will be reading Dec. 10

Thursday, November 25, 2010

English 9, Thurs. Nov. 25

We have started to read the novel, Never Cry Wolf, by Farley Mowat. It will be a self-paced unit. BE SURE TO COPY DOWN THE UNIT OUTLINE NOTES FROM YOUR HOMEWORK BUDDY.

After each chapter, you need to write a response from Farley's point of view. Write it as a diary entry. Use details from the novel to bring it alive. Put these responses in your JOURNALS. BE SURE TO FOLLOW THE CRITERIA.
You will also need to post it note key quotes as you will be writing a literary essay on this novel.

The topic: Myths versus reality of Farley's experience with the wolves.

Read ahead. Read closely. Post it note passages that address the topic above.

WE READ CHAPTER 1 ALOUD IN CLASS TODAY. READ CHAPTER ONE AND TWO FOR TOMORROW. WRITE A RESPONSE ON CHAPTER ONE.
WE CAN WRITE A CHAPTER TWO RESPONSE IN CLASS TOMORROW.

Be sure to post it note one to two quotes per chapter.

English 11E, Thurs. Nov. 25

We are in the midst of yummy novels now. I hope you are enjoying your choices.

I returned the poetry manuscripts and x-grade paragraphs this week. If you wish to re-write the x-grade, please let me know.

I'll be returning your compare/contrast paragraphs today.

Monday: Poetry Cafe--Please choose two of your favourite poems to read and bring a snack to share.

This weekend, have a good look at all the novel contract items and see if you can get a good start on them.
Projects due, Tues. Dec. 7.

Writing 12, Thurs. Nov. 25

I'm really looking forward to reading your next two pages of the story. I'm getting the feeling that this fiction writing is starting to sink in. You are asking the right questions about dialogue and character motivation and how to move through time and space. Lovely. You are also paying attention to all the details on the orange sheet that we discussed in class a couple of weeks back. Good for you. You are amazing.

Lots of exciting things coming up.
Friday: John Gould TWo pages of fiction due.
Tues: Trip to SMU--you can't go without a permission form so please don't leave it to the last minute. Practice what you want to read. We'll do a demo in class on Monday.

Next Thurs: a good copy, carefully edited, representing all of the criteria is due. Look forward to it.

Enjoy the snow.

Great Literary Event Friday night: Black Stilt Coffee House Wendy Morton's 70th birthday reading. It's going to be great and she actually has presents for you all. Hope to see you there.

Wednesday, November 24, 2010

English 9, Wed. Nov. 24

We couldn't complete our debates today due to absences.
Maybe tomorrow.

Soooooooooo, we signed out the novel, Never Cry Wolf from the library and I read the class an article by J. Windh about human interactions with wolves. If you were away today, ask me for the article. We created a fact/react chart and a paragraph response in our diaries.

We start the novel tomorrow.

I also collected the Temple Grandin paragraphs/charts and returned the vocabulary quizzes.

Tonight: Research myths and attitudes towards wolves. If you can't find any about wolves, try bears or cougars. We want to see what the general public thinks about wolves to see if it has changed since 1963. Bring your research to class to share.

English 11 E, Wed. Nov. 24

We read, read, read today. Some people have already finished their novels. Imagine being in that position!!! AH two leisurely weeks to complete your projects.

Thanks for entering the Poetic Licence contest for Canadian Youth. If you have not done so yet, see yesterday's blog for details.

I also collected entries for BCTELA and Claremont Review contest plus submissions to The Claremont Review. Let me know if you are submitting to Aerie and to Polyphony.

Tonight: READ.

Writing 12, Wed. Nov. 24

The Saanich News Winners were announced today. If you won, please email me a good copy asap.

We worked in groups reading from our literary library books looking for key aspects of the craft: how to writers get characters to move through time? How is fiction similar to poetry?
We took notes. Carolyn presented writer James Marshall and it was wonderful. Get the notes tomorrow. We talked about how key it is not to have a character randomly offering a reader BACK STORY. MAKE SURE YOU understand this concept.

We have extended the due date for this week's pages to Friday. I need two complete pages of your story--painstakingly edited, following the criteria, developing your story. It might be a scene and a half, two scenes, whatever you need to fulfill the length requirement.

Remember John Gould Friday. His response will be due Monday.

Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Writing 12, Tues. Nov. 23

Great work today.
I'll announce the winners of the Saanich News "contest" in class tomorrow.
If I haven't seen your winter piece yet, you are out of luck.

Today, we edited the scene using specific criteria:
tension, sentence variety, strong verbs, pacing--Be sure to use each word carefully. Don't rush it. Focus on each scene in the story while keeping the larger view (the story's entirety in your head).

Bring back the permission forms asap. Talk to your block 2 teachers about missing next Tues.
Don't leave it until the last minute.

English 11E, Tues. Nov. 23

I returned your wonderful poetry manuscripts. We'll have a poetry cafe next Monday. Be prepared to read your two favorite poems. Bring goodies to share with the class.

Today, I handed out the novel contract and showed samples of what I expect. These projects are due Dec. 7th, a Tues. You have two weeks.

Tonight, enter the Poetic Licence Contest for Canadian Youth. It's an electronic submission. All the details are on http://www.youngpoets.ca/
Bring me the email that shows you have sumbitted.
You may also submit to BCTELA, Claremont Review contest and/or magazine, The Aerie and Polyphony HS Magazine. Pick up the forms for BCTELA and C.R. contest from me.

Read your novel tonight. You should be finished it by next Tuesday so you can start all your projects.

English 9, Tues. Nov. 23

TEMPLE GRANDIN PARAGRAPHS DUE WED. PLUS YOUR WHAT? SO WHAT? CHART

If you missed today's class, you missed the following: Temple Grandin is a real person. This film is based on her life. She is now a professor at Colorado State University and she lectures world wide on autism and cattle handling.

Use the literary must-have list as well as all you know about good paragraph writing to explore what has lead to her success and discuss some of the roadblocks she has overcome.

Wed: We will finish the debates.
Please return your Pigman novel because in order to get a new novel, you must return the old one.
Thanks.

Monday, November 22, 2010

English 9, Monday, Nov. 22

Today we are finishing the film, Temple Grandin and we'll get a good start on your paragraphs.
Good copy of the paragraph is due Wednesday, Nov. 24.

We're starting the novel by Farley Mowat called Never Cry Wolf.
We'll be looking at his view of wolves as a biologist before and after he lives with them.
Based on his experiences living and working in the north.

English 11E, Mon. Nov. 22

Today, we'll be starting our independent novel unit. Lots of wonderful books and projects to choose from. If you were away today and have one of these books at home, please read the first 30 pages and especially if the school gets closed due to snow, keep reading 30 pages per day (more if your book is large)
Cat's Eye or Alias Grace by Margaret Atwood
The Stone Angel by Margaret Laurence
A Complicated Kindness by Miriam Toews
Book of Negroes by Lawrence Hill
April Raintree Beatrice Culleton
Who Has Seen the Wind W.O. Mitchell
Life of Pi by Yann Martel
Gum Thief by Douglas Coupland
Homesick by Guy Vanderhaeghe
Svoboda by Bill Stenson
Crow Lake by Mary Lawson

I'll be collecting the poetry manuscripts today. Can't wait to read them.
I have your cross-grade tests marked. Will return your compare/contrast paragraphs soon.

Enjoy the snow.

Monday, Nov. 22, Writing 12

Today, I collected the winter pieces. Now that we have snow, you may want to revise your piece.
What I'm noticing as I mark them, is that they really are not that suitable for a community newspaper.
What I think we need is more attention to the content. For example, would you want to read this piece in the newspaper? What does the piece reveal about winter? Plus, there cannot be any grammatical errors and I haven't found one yet that is error-free. So, back to the drawing board. Let's show our community that students can write and write well.

I handed out the permission forms for our trip to SMUS. We go next Tues. Nov. 30th. No fee. Bring your lunch and poems or fiction to read. You will need permission from your block two teacher.
BRING SIGNED PERMISSION FORMS TO ME TUESDAY. THANK YOU.

I need to see the scene exercise from Friday's class as well. Today we took a lot of notes on what constitutes a good scene. If you were absent, get these notes from a reliable peer.

Monday's homework: Write a scene you can use in your story using today's scene criteria. Bring it to class Tuesday ready for editing.
If you have not yet entered all the contests and magazines yet, you must do so. Tomorrow is the last day for marks for this project.
Bring your $20.00 for The Claremont Review if you have not done so yet.

This Friday's library reading is cancelled in order to accommodate John Gould's visit.
We'll put November's readers together with December readers. Next library event is Dec. 10.

You may use the SMUS reading as your second term literary event if you submit a response the next day.
Late responses will not be accepted.

Lots to do to get your story ready for the Dec. 2 deadline. Do not leave it until the last minute.

Good luck. Enjoy the snow. Write a better piece for the Saanich News.

Tuesday, November 16, 2010

English 9, Tues. Nov. 16

We'll debate how well the debates went today when next we meet.
Tonight, study vocabulary words, 1-25 for our test tomorrow.

We're going to watch a film starting tomorrow which will lead us into our next novel unit. If you have not yet returned your Pigman novel to the library, please do so.

Englsih 11E, Tues. Nov. 16

Today: You handed in the poem based on the Naming the Baby poem.

We wrote a poem using several resources to bring an abstract title to life.

This poem plus the poem you will write in class, Thursday, with the Writing 12 students, is due Friday for peer editing. Please arrive with the poems typed.

Wed: Compare and contrast test in class.

Mon: Poetry manuscript is due. Criteria: surprise, concrete imagery, sound, enjambement, caesura, epigraph, appeal to five senses, proofread, cut out cliched language and ideas.

Give your manuscript a title.

Writing 12, Tues. Nov. 16

Good work in the lab today. You have five contests to enter. Follow the instruction sheet carefully.

Several of you need to bring in the entry fee of $20.00 asap.

Thurs: Two pages of fiction are due. Make sure you put at the top whether these pages are the intro or a scene that you will put somewhere in your story

Mon: Winter piece for The Saanich News is due. Any style: poem, journalism, essay, story, rant, diary entry, obituaray etc Be inventive and appropriate to a community audience. Best 10 will be published.

Wed. M.A.C. Farrant presentation.
Next week, John Gould.

Monday, November 15, 2010

English 9, Mon. Nov. 15

Great practice debates, today. You sound prepared and informed.

Tonight, turn the points into bullets and print them on large font so you can easily look at the point and then instead of reading off of your page, you'll be able to speak your points.

In order to gain points for your team, be prepared. Have several facts and inferences ready. Know your sources so that you can emphasize that this fact comes from a university or from an expert in that field.

Good luck. Meet in the classroom for attendance and then we'll make our way to the library.

USSR: Hopefully, you all have at least one book response in the bin by now. Aim for three books this month.

English 11E, Mon. Nov. 15

Wonderful story, Liana.

Today, we learned three new terms and studied the poem, "Chinook" by Chris Eng, from the Naming the Baby book. Be sure to get the notes. The three terms are epigraph, caesura and enjambement.

Good copy of your Naming the Baby imitation is due tomorrow. Thursday, we have four Writing 12 students visiting to read and to do a writing exercise with you. That poem will be due for editing Friday.

Monday, your mini-manuscript is due. If you were absent today, copy out the criteria from a partner when you return. Your four poems must meet the criteria in order for your manuscript to be successful. Next week, you will choose where you would like to get these poems published.

I'll be returning the compare/contrast paragraphs tomorrow. Wed. you will do another compare/contrast in class. It must be completed in class.

Writing 12, Monday, Nov. 15

Hopefully, you got a good start on your stories today.
I need to see two pages, Thursday. Please double space. These two pages may be the beginning, or a scene.

Tomorrow, meet in the computer lab. Bring the C. Review and BCTELA poems (without your name) to the lab with you. Be sure to have your manuscripts, address, bio, etc on your email.
You'll also be writing a piece about winter for the Saanich News.
Get started in the lab tomorrow. It's due Monday.

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

English 9, Wed. Nov. 10

Today, we finalized our charts and began to write our speeches.

With four days off, you have a terrific opportunity to read! Visit your local library if you have
run out of good books to read.

English 11 E, Wed. Nov. 10

Excellent job on the edited object poems. I really enjoyed them.

Today, I collected the compare and contrast paragraph on the Young and Gillan poems.

We worked on reading modern poems in the Naming the Baby text. Choose one poem that you wish to imitate--i.e. its theme, style, shape, use of imagery or surprise, point of view, etc. and write and revise a poem. Type it up and be prepared to read the original poem you are imitating and have your poem edited.

You have four days off. Take the opportunity to finish a book or two for your USSR mark.

Writing 12, Wed. Nov. 10

This weekend, you must finish at least one of the literary books you signed out from the library. Do a little research on the publisher as you'll be completing a USSR form Monday in class. Also, be prepared for oral questions.

If you were away today, email me for an important handout.

Next week, we'll be writing a lot to get this story completed for Dec. 2.

Tuesday, we are in the lab to send poems to all the contests.

Print out 3 copies of the poems you want to submit to The Claremont Review and print out the two you plan to send to BCTELA. Be sure to remove your name from the poems. You can fill out a contest entry form during class on Tuesday.

You'll be electronically submitting to Polyphony, Aerie and the League. Be sure all materials are on your email. You need bios and address and a picture of yourself for Aerie.

Have a restful four days.

Tuesday, November 9, 2010

English 11, Nov. 9, Tuesday

Tonight: Alissa York, novelist and Don Domanski, poet, at SMUS McCrae at Richmond 7 p.m. Free admission. See you there. If you need a ride, call me--250-478-6008.

Great job on the X-grade comprehension tests today.

Due tomorrow: Compare and contrast paragraph on the Young and Gillan poems. Good luck. Only three of you took advantage of the editing help I offered today so that must mean--you are ready to go! Yay.

Writing 12, Tues. Nov. 9

Wonderful presentation on writer, John Gould, today. Thank you, Becky and Emily.

Two openings due tomorrow. See the criteria list.
One to two pages each, double spaced. Follow the model plus the examples in the texts that you have.

Tonight: Alissa York, novelist and Dom Domanski, poet, at SMUS McCrae at Richmond 7 p.m.

English 9, Tues. Nov. 9

USSR tonight! Do more research for your debate if you need to.
We'll begin our speeches in class tomorrow!

Monday, November 8, 2010

Writing 12, Mon. Nov. 8

Two story openings Wed.
Big literary event Tues. night at SMU. 7:30 start. Alissa York, a Spectrum grad and fabulous novelist and short story writer.

Tonight, organize all your poems to be submitted. Hand in your tracking form and your manuscript post-it noted for Claremont Review submission.
Next Tues. we are in the computer lab to submit to the electronic contests.

Keep reading your USSR books. You have three responses due by the end of the month.

English 11E, Mon. Nov. 8

Thank you for submitting your wonderfully edited poems this morning on the object or the animal.
Those of you who have been away, be sure to get the criteria list and get a peer to edit the poem before you submit.

Today, we started our compare and contrast paragraph on the two poems. Be sure to get the notes from a peer. Paragraph is due Wednesday.
Tomorrow: X-grade test. You'll be reading a story and writing a paragraph. Study all your key handouts for literary paragraphs which are also on the English website; www.claremont-school/english

English 9, Mon. Nov. 8

Today, we completed vocabulary up to word 25. Be sure to include really good sentences. We did practice quizzes on the last 13 words. Big quiz next week on 1-25.

We reviewed the debate criteria. We'll be working in groups tomorrow to finalize our speeches.

Tonight: make sure that all your facts and reactions are complete. Make sure you have all the bibliographical information as well.

Friday, November 5, 2010

English 9, Friday, Nov. 5

Today, we went into the library to work on our debates.

Each student arrived with three facts and three good reactions in their FACT / REACT charts.

If you missed today, you need to do 65 minutes of your research.

For Monday, ensure that you can divide your topic into For / Against.

You may do so by creating separate FACT / REACT charts OR you may highlight all the facts FOR your topic in one colour and all the facts against your topic in another colour.

Also, ensure that you have at least 10 facts all together. Next week, you'll have an opportunity to work with your group, share your evidence and begin to write out your speeches.

Read your USSR book this weekend. See if you can get a book finished.

BONUS: Arrive Monday knowing the name of the play we saw Thursday and the author's name. Be ready to discuss it.

Friday, Nov. 5, English 11E

We edited our object/animal poems looking for ONE thing: Detail--things you can see, smell, taste, hear and feel. Cut all abstractions such as hope, fear, pride, strength and replace them with descriptions of people, places and things that represent these qualities.

Homework:

Type up a good copy of this poem. You will be marked on the following criteria:
  • Detail that appeals to the five senses
  • You imitate the four poems we studied in class. Learn from these poems.
  • Offers the reader a new and refreshing portrayal of the object, animal or city
  • Avoids cliches
  • Avoids obvious connections i.e. children are innocent, elephants are wise, lions are strong etc
I read Writing 12 student, Alexandria Garcia's poem to the class. It was about childhood and the first line was Childhood is a bucket of figs . . . and then it went on to show lots of images to build on that statement.

Next, we worked in groups to create a TICK chart on the poem, "Social Studies Report" by Patricia Young. Get the poem from me early Monday if you were absent today so that you can be prepared for class.
Have a great weekend.
Read. Read. Read.

Friday, Nov. 5, Writing 12

Excellent work with the dialogue punctuation quiz and working with the abstract list for good dialogue, compliments of writer and UVic prof, Bill Gaston.

Monday: Lit. Mag. submission is due. Your poem tracking sheet is due. You will need to post-it note all the poems in your manuscript for submission to The Claremont Review.

Tues: Student presentation on our first fiction writer.

Wed. Two openings are due. Be sure to follow the criteria.

Keep reading. You have three books to complete by the end of the month. Post-it note key items. You will have suprise quizzes throughout the month on these items. Look for wonderful dialgogue, superb character development, surprising themes, scintillating use of language, incredible scene changes, etc.

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Writing 12, Wed. Nov. 3

MANUCSCRIPTS DUE THURS. NO LATES ACCEPTED. EMAIL AN ELECTRONIC COPY TO AURORA@SHAW.CA TONIGHT.

Thank you.

Be sure to read all three of your short story books by the end of Nov. YOu are responsible for post-it noting key aspects of each story. Look for insight into the writer's craft. How does he/she create character, dialogue, use motifs, choose settings, change scenes, keep suspense, make it believable, capture your attention, observe life, bring characters to life etc.

English 11E, Wed. Nov. 3

Amazing discussion of William's poem today. Well done. You are working well at the interpretive level. If you were absent today, complete the TICK chart and be sure to copy out the notes from a friend as we filled up four boards full of our responses to the poem.

Tonight, write a thematic statement that clearly synthesizes the TICK chart responses.

We also did an exercise in writing clear, imagistic lists for our list poems.

English 9, Wed. Nov. 3

Thanks for cleaning the grounds today. Great job!

We chose our debate topics and our teams. If you were absent, please call your homework buddy.
Tonight, start your Fact/React chart Find 3 pieces of evidence (and keep the biblographical info, i.e. author, title, publisher or url if it's a web resource) and write a response for each fact. We practiced creating reactions in class today so be sure to contact your two homework buddies.

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Writing 12, Tues. Nov. 2

Thanks to Carli and Kate for the wonderful presentation on bill bisset. Bill will be reading at Serious Coffee, Mon. Nov. 15 at 7:30. See the poster on the Claremont Review Room door.

Chris from U.Vic visited the class and answered your wonderful questions.

We went to the library and exchanged all of our poetry books for fabulous fiction books. You need to read all three books this month. Both fiction books and the literary magazine. I have envelopes for the literary magazine submission if you need them.

Looking forward to your manuscripts Thursday.

English 11 E, Tues. Nov. 2

We started poetry today and everyone cheered!! If you were absent, please return your Lord of the Flies novel to the library (remove all the post-it notes) and sign  out two poetry books-Naming the Baby and in the Clear. Read the poem on page 20 of Naming the Baby.
We are using the acronym TICK to help us focus on how to read poems.
T-Title (brainstorm all the ways you think the title contributes to the poem)
I-Introduction (Re-read the first stanza or two and brainstorm what the tone is, anything significant. We discovered juxtaposition (define) and state its significance
C-Conclusion -re-read the last stanza or two and make connections to early stanzas. Why does the poem end there? What image or images stand out? What is the tone? Has the tone changed?
K-Key points--chose three key points from the poem--a stanza, a symbol, an image, tone, a technique, a question in the poem, a line break and explain why all three are significant.

Bring all the notes to class and we'll devise a thematic statement about the poem.

I collected the quote log and the essay today. If you were absent, you must bring a note and if the absence is reasonable, your work will be accepted.

We also wrote a poem in class today. Write a poem using all of the following items:
a month, a body of water, I, a season, a carname and year, a brand name, you, an animal, a type of tree, a description of light, a name of a place, love, a character from a film book, or history, and a texture (sticky, icy, rough etc) The poem may be any style.

English 9, Tues. Nov. 2

Excellent peer editing today. You looked and found (we hope) that WOW factor--enthusiasm, creativity and insight. Thanks to everyone. We had 100% of the essays completed. Well done.

Tonight is your final edit. Use the yellow essay checklist as you do the final edit. Those of you who were away, use the checklist on the green sheets that you have as you do your final revisions.

Tomorrow submit: the good copy, the draft, the checklist and the editors' checklists. Also, submit the completed quote log.

Title page for the essay. Give the essay a title which reflects your overall thesis. For example:
Growing Up In A Corrupt World in Paul Zindel's The Pigman. Italicize the novel title.
In the bottom left hand corner, write your name, English 9, Ms. Stenson, November 2, 2010
Have fun with your revisions.

Monday, November 1, 2010

English 9, Monday, Nov. 1

Excellent work to complete body paragraph 3 and your conclusion today. If you were absent today, you have a sheet on how to write the conclusion. It's green and attached to your body paragraph sheets. If you can't find it, check the English website www.claremont-school.ca/english

Tonight: type up your draft. Bring the entire essay (double spaced) to class for peer editing. Make sure it is printed and ready to go at the beginning of class.

Final copy plus the quote log are due Wed.

Monday, Nov. 1 English 11E

Excellent work to peer edit today.

Tomorrow--hand in the entire project: good copy, draft, editors' checklist, your checklist and cover page.

Also, submit your quotation log. The coloured one is fine.
Be ready to start poetry Tuesday. Bring back your novels so you can sign out the new books.

Writing 12, Monday, Nov. 1

Welcome to Fiction!!!  Great insights into the world of story openings this morning. Thank you for your wise words.

Thurs: Poetry Manuscript plus electronic version due.
Monday: Your submission to a literary magazine is due. If you need envelopes, please ask.
Tuesday: Bring back all library books as we'll be signing out new ones. Re-new any books you need to keep for your author presentation.

Tonight: Sara and Robyn's exercise: Write an intro which focuses in on one trait of the main character. The example was her ordinariness but it could be shyness, pride, greed, aggression, fear etc. Use any combination of techniques to get this trait across: dialogue, description, symbolm, repetition etc.