I checked the what/so what charts today. We discussed the components of an A thesis, reviewed and emphasized the literary must-haves list. We wrote and peer edited thesis statements based on question 2 or 8. We wrote down the elements of a strong thesis (see below) on the back of our must-haves list so we have all literary para. writing information handy. We also briefly mentioned recitations. Choose a passage, soon!
If you were absent today, please complete the following:
- Review your notes from last class.
- Ensure that your chart is thorough--good charts create good paragraphs but great charts create great paragraphs.
- Re-read and memorize your literary must-haves sheet.
- Write a thesis based on your chart and check it against the elements of a good thesis statement.
- Complete a 300-400 word, double-spaced paragraph on the question of your choice.
The epic poem, Beowulf, utilizes the evil descendant of Cain, Grendel, to illustrate the notion of chaos. Since the Anglo-Saxon era epitomized insecurity and war, Grendel's isolation and anti-heroic traits teach the tribe to value the heroic tradition.
Elements of a great thesis: (Copy these notes onto the back of your literary must-haves sheet).
1. A thesis must answer the question. Tip:Re-word the question but use synonyms to replace
the words in the question.
2. Provide a provocative (thought-provoking) answer which responds to the question So What? Tip: use the best parts of your so-what chart here. You need an insightful, enthusiastic response that you feel confident you can prove.
3. Ensure that the thesis includes all of the points you plan to discuss. Tip: This extra effort before you begin to write will enable you to write coherently and in an organized fashion.
If I say in my thesis that I will discuss the features of red, green and yellow umbrellas, the only points allowed in my paragraph are those of red, green and yellow umbrellas. All other points must be cut. Follow these tips to an A, friends.
Excellent work today. I was impressed by your dedication to revision. Yay Lit 12!
Submit the chart and the paragraph on Tuesday.
Ensure that all assignments include a title, date and your first and last name.
Ensure that all assignments are double-spaced and in blue or black ink or typed.
Follow the literary must-haves list.
NO USING PRONOUNS IN LITERARY WRITING. NO THIS SHOWS OR THIS QUOTE REVEALS EITHER. Discuss these items with a peer if you missed today's class. I can't emphasize this point enough. PRONOUNS EQUAL LAZY, SUPERFICIAL WRITING.
There. I will now stop ranting and start working.
Good luck. These paragraphs will offer you great ideas for improvement. I will award 6 points for each section on the literary must-haves list.
