Tuesday, June 10, 2014

English 9, Period 4 only

You have watched the film, completed the vocabulary list. Tonight, study your vocabulary words and finish your USSR book and complete the USSR form which is due on Thurs. It is okay if you have not finished the book you are currently reading. You may also use Our Town but you must include one other book. You had 9 days and two weekends of reading in June so I am expecting at least 150 pages for a C, 200 for a C+, 300 for a B and 400 for an A.

Tomorrow, we will write the essay in class.

Tonight: ORGANIZE YOUR QUOTATIONS ON THE BOOK AND THE FILM SO THAT YOU CAN CREATE A THESIS TO ANSWER THE QUESTION: DEMONSTRATE HOW WILDER AND ROSS REVEAL THEIR THEME THAT LIFE IS TOO PRECIOUS TO WASTE. 

Below are the sample introduction and conclusion templates you will need to write your essay: I will hand out copies during class tomorrow BUT IF YOU WISH TO GET A HEAD START, BEGIN AT HOME.


Writing An Essay On More Than One Work

Introduction Template

Hook: ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thesis (without author title) Be sure that your thesis answers the question.

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First Body Paragraph Summary (PLUS AUTHOR AND TITLE, CITED CORRECTLY) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Second Body Paragraph Summary (PLUS AUTHOR AND TITLE, CITED CORRECTLY) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Repeat the thesis (usually in a shorter and more emotionally impactful manner) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


Sample:

Time marches on. In order to realize life's value, one must connect to one's dreams, one's family, friends or community; not to do so wastes this one precious life. In the play, Our Town, by Thornton Wilder, Emily does not realize until after her death how blind most humans are to the gift that life can be when one is committed to living life fully. Similarly, Shelby, in the film, Steel Magnolias, directed by Herbert Ross, reveals that despite a life-threatening disease, she is not willingly to hide in the closet and worry the way her mother does—Shelby commits to her dreams. It is easy to waste one's life due to the troubles and tensions one experiences but both Wilder and Ross declare that an even dangerous crime is to waste the one chance to vehemently explore the world. Time may march on but it is imperative not to waste one second.





Writing A Conclusion For An Essay on More Than One Work (story, play, novel, film)

Conclusion Template

Thesis (no author or title)
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First Body Paragraph Summary (Mention the title or the author but not both) Be sure to say the most important point you made in the body paragraph. Do not simply copy and paste your thesis. Be sure to engage the reader here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Second Body Paragraph Summary (Mention the title or the author but not both) Be sure to say the most important point you made in the body paragraph. Do not simply copy and paste your thesis. Be sure to engage the reader here). _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Repeat the Thesis in an Emotional and Impactful Manner (You could respond to your hook here as well).

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