Wednesday, September 12, 2012

English 10: Revising your paragraph

We focused on the literary must-haves today and then we edited our "Spring" paragraphs with a partner.

Remember, submit work that is PAGE PERFECT. Title, Date, Name, double spaced, typed or neatly written.

Thesis: answers the question . . . . and includes the author and title. This sentence tells the reader what is to come.

Opinion
Proof
Explanation

Transition

Opinion
Proof
Explanation

Transition

Opinion
Proof
Explanation

Conclusion

Once you have mastered the "must-haves", you can concentrate on style:
Diction, sentence variety, synonyms, insight, expand your use of punctuation.

We also added two new words:
5. permeate
6. inadvertent, inadvertently

We had a quiz on the first 6 words. Be sure to practice.
Next week, we will use a site called Quizlet to practice our vocabulary.