Revise your poem using the items below:
Sound devices: assonance, alliteration, dissonance, rhythm, internal rhyme, repetition
Line break
Enjambement
Unique detail
Image in the title
Show don't tell
Get at the big ideas through the small details
Consider: point of view, setting, letting the ending open rather than close (no summaries, no "conclusions")
Hand in the typed draft on Monday.
USSR forms are due Monday.
Vocabulary Quiz is Monday. Words 1-50. Study. Memorize the parts of speech, too.
