Great work this week with the poems. They still have a long way to go, but that is natural. I love the imagery this week and you are adding more context so we can follow along. It's good to see so much surprise and clarity, too. Keep using the editing sheets to edit your work.
Once you have revised copies, you may hand them to me for additional editing at any time. Write, PLEASE EDIT, at the top.
Tomorrow, bring an idea for a poem about a family incident, similar to the Jessica Senecal poem, Family Breakfast, which I read aloud today. We'll write a family poem during class tomorrow.
